Looks cool, but I don't like the lights mounting on the surface like that, if you could recess them in or use different lights I think it would funtion/look better.
You could also put a stainless steel sheet behind the lettering to make it really stand out.
Even better you could put a piece of plexiglass in front of the stainless and use LED's to light the plexi from the side and really show off your ride in the twilight hours. It could even be wired like a 3rd brakelight.